Thursday, May 29, 2008

Greedy today :)

Jo kehte hain chaahiye bas ik boond paani
Unhein wo ik boond de do
Baaki samundar ka saara paani mujhe de do

Jo kehte hain chaahiye bas kuchh pal shaanti ke
Unhein wo kuchh palon ki shaanti de do
Zindagi bhar ki muskuraahatein mujhe de do

Jo kehte hain kuchh baatein band honthon se hi hoti hain
Unhein unka ji bhar ke khamoshi de do
Saare meethe bol, saari hansi ki aawaazein mujhe de do

Jo kehte hain chaahiye bas thodi si jagah kisi ke dil mein
Unhein wo thodi si jagah de do
Baaki bachi jagah sab ke dil ki mujhe de do

Jo kehte hain thoda hai thode ki zaroorat hai
Unhein unka 'thoda' de do
Baaki saara jahaan mujhe de do

Jo kehte hain mujhe laalchi,
Unhein kehne do, khush rehne do
Bas jo bhi chaahiye mujhe, har wo cheez mujhe de do

10 comments:

  1. he he
    good, a little bit of greed didn't harm the world
    by the way, both mirages and dreams mingle here already, am surprised :)

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  2. Yeah, I hope it doesn't :D

    I have always been fond of dreamers .. Have been reading both your and Deepti's blog for a long time now, about a year I guess .. aaj yun hi bas himmat kar li aap ke blog pe comment karne ki

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  3. hehe, cant stop laughing :)
    Very fresh post...waise, if everyone asks for thoda thoda, which they do, at th end apke liye zyada bachne nahi wala! :D

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  4. Laughne ke liye hi likha hai :D

    As for the baaki na bachne waali baat, well kadachit aapko sansaar ki vishaalta aur udaarta ka anumaan nahi hai :)

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  5. :) reminds me of the Shahrukh khan song... chhand taare tod laaoon.. saari duniyaa par mein chhaaoon, similar sentiment. Pretty daring! To ask for so much! Liked it..

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  6. Mast likha hai! (Waise last stanza mein kuchh twist/dhamaake ki ummeed thi, vo nahii hua.)

    Itna bhi greedy nahi hai waise, ye to 'jiyo aur jeene do' philosophy hai! :D

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  7. Mast likha hai,
    Btw ankurmec feels tumhara talent kanpur me ham logon ne daba ke rakha tha, aisa tha kya ??

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  8. @vibhav

    That song came to my mind also while I was writing it but SRK's wishes in that song are different from mine

    And lucky people are allowed to dare .. and both me and Shahrukh Khan are lucky :D

    @vik

    Dhamaake karne ka hunar jis din seekh jaayenge
    Goonj sunne ko mehfil mein tumhein aana na padega

    Good that you think it isn't too greedy ... so it is reasonable then :)

    @vasaNT

    Aap yahaan tashreef laaye .. main to dhanya ho gaya

    baaki rahi baat talent daba ke rakhne ki, to ek she'r arz hai

    Shikaar se mat poochh, aye shikaari, ki kya wo phasa tha jaal mein
    Usko to bas shikaar hone ka maza yaad hai

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  9. Bhaut badia , bahut hi badia.. likha hai..
    laalchi aadmi! :-))))

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  10. allah meherbaan to gadha pehelwaan :D

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