:) .. your comments often restore my faith in my writing..
@Mayank
tujhko ye sahi lagega, ye nahi socha tha..
@vibhav
well, that's your style .. I would feel uncomfortable if I leave it at that, wondering if I have made myself clear.. I know that is being insecure, but then, that is what I am :)
and btw, I wrote the third line in my mind before the first two..
Besides, I am obsessed with Trivenis ;)
@phoenix
Aisi taareef tumse pehle to nahi mili kabhi.. it seems, i am getting better :D
@thequark
yaar angrezi mein chat karte karte ab aise hi likhna aur padhna zyaada comfortable lagta hai.. ye pata hai mujhe ki aaj kal kaafi aasaan hai hindi mein likhna par aise hi better lagta hai.. maybe from next time onwards, dono scripts mein likh diya karoonga.
Ab kisi dost se haal puchte hue kuch ghabratey hain hum Ke mera ek sawaal hazaron sawaal khade na kar de kahin. Bade jatan se mere dil ko jhooth se behlayaa hai usney, Darr lagta hai, ki aankhon se sach padh na loon mai kahin.
Haal poochhna, poochha jaana to ek muddat se humein bhaata nahi, Poochhne se haal aksar pata nahi chalta Aur waise bhi agar marham na maujood ho kahin To marz ka naam jaan kar bhi kya faayda..
ekdum!!
ReplyDeletebaat ko bakhuubi nibhaya apne shabdon ke zariye :-)
Very nicely put! :)
ReplyDeletePhod diya :)
ReplyDeleteLiked it. In fact, I feel just the first two lines are sufficient.
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ReplyDelete@Geetanjali
ReplyDeleteshabdon ka hi to sahara hai :)
@Vik
:) .. your comments often restore my faith in my writing..
@Mayank
tujhko ye sahi lagega, ye nahi socha tha..
@vibhav
well, that's your style .. I would feel uncomfortable if I leave it at that, wondering if I have made myself clear.. I know that is being insecure, but then, that is what I am :)
and btw, I wrote the third line in my mind before the first two..
Besides, I am obsessed with Trivenis ;)
@phoenix
Aisi taareef tumse pehle to nahi mili kabhi.. it seems, i am getting better :D
@thequark
yaar angrezi mein chat karte karte ab aise hi likhna aur padhna zyaada comfortable lagta hai.. ye pata hai mujhe ki aaj kal kaafi aasaan hai hindi mein likhna par aise hi better lagta hai.. maybe from next time onwards, dono scripts mein likh diya karoonga.
truly said!!!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant.
ReplyDeleteAb kisi dost se haal puchte hue kuch ghabratey hain hum
Ke mera ek sawaal hazaron sawaal khade na kar de kahin.
Bade jatan se mere dil ko jhooth se behlayaa hai usney,
Darr lagta hai, ki aankhon se sach padh na loon mai kahin.
@Saumya
ReplyDeleteand sadly true :)
@Taps
Haal poochhna, poochha jaana to ek muddat se humein bhaata nahi,
Poochhne se haal aksar pata nahi chalta
Aur waise bhi agar marham na maujood ho kahin
To marz ka naam jaan kar bhi kya faayda..
this is wow!
ReplyDelete:).. thanks.
ReplyDeletewell played! :)
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