Sunday, May 17, 2009

Vaada

Aaj kaha kisi ne ki hai karz ke jaisa
Har ek vaada jo bhi maine kiya hai

Khud se kiya vaada bhi hai karz hi shaayad, magar
Sochta hoon ki ye karz maine diya hai ya liya hai


PS: Today, on orkut ---"Today's fortune: A promise made is a debt unpaid."
Hence, the lines.

8 comments:

  1. You've been really enjoying poetry these days.. And have been coming up with beautiful thoughts.

    This one is a delight to read. :)

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  2. @Tapasya

    :)

    @Vik

    yep .. enjoying enjoying.. lets see if there are more coming up :D

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  3. good thought :)
    khud se kiya vada pura karo ya na karo..jana toh internal audit mein hi hai..
    achcha hoga ki pura kar lo.. do baar achievement ho jayegi!!

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  4. Profound!, my friend, is how I would describe this post.

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  5. @Bhushan

    haan ... poora to karna hi hai ... karz to na liya achchha aur na diya achchha :)

    @Geetanjali

    guess, it is more profound for the reader than for the writer.. I also found it more profound when I read it :D

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  6. the depth is increasing it seems :)

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